Talk:Tower of Magi
Abolishment of the Triad?
- "internal politics precipitated the abolishment of the Triad
Well, as soon as I get more information, I will expand on it. Nice teaser, eh? :P I don't know how to do this talking stuff. --Drakey 15:30, 28 Aug 2005 (CEST)
This page requires major changes. It needs to be sectioned, and those "editor's notes" have to be removed - it doesn't make the article "authentic"; any real compendium entry would be edited without notes inside the text. I'll get on it today or tomorrow. Arancaytar | Send Reply! --- That is not dead which can eternal lie... 13:34, 6 September 2006 (CDT)
This is a small task, but it does separate the whole text into several parts that can individually be improved quite easily. The next step is to reform the paragraphs so that each section stands on its own. That means no "However", "Therefore" or "Shortly after" qualifiers at the beginning of a new section.
We could also do with a map of the Tower. Did anyone ever design the upper levels, by the way? It's all very well for the game to tell you that you're in a tower, but for all we saw of it, it was in fact a completely flat, one-floor building.